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Released27, Aug 2026

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When Asad cut Mama’s call, everything that happened didn’t upset her as much as hearing Rauda’s voice speaking. She was pacing around the room anxiously, her body trembling with panic and fear overtaking her heart. "Cut Muwadda’s call"—what he had said flashed in her mind, and her heart skipped a beat as she repeated the word, "Muwadda! In Hausa, it means Love," she said aloud, feeling her heart beating so hard it felt like it would jump out of her chest.

"What does that mean? Have they gotten so close that he’s calling her by that name, or what does it mean? It cannot be, by Almighty God, it cannot be!" she said in a raised voice, picking up her phone with tears welling in her eyes as she realized she was openly being separated from her son whom she loved more than anything in the world. She dialed Malam’s number, and before he could even speak, she said, "Who is this girl, and why can’t she just be killed?"

Hearing this, he caught the drift and said, "Your Highness, it’s not that it’s impossible; it is possible. It’s just a bit difficult because since she is not in town, for the job to be done well, we need something of hers—like a blouse, a headscarf, or her hair. You see, getting those will be difficult, which is why." Mama asked, "If they are gotten, are you sure she will be killed?" "Certainly, we will become the means of removing her from this world." "It will be brought to you by tonight; I want everything done by tomorrow." "Consider it done, Your Highness." She ended the call and dialed Mum’s line.

As soon as Mum picked up, before she could speak, Mama said, "By what means can we get the headscarf of that wretched girl who has bewitched my son?" Mum was silent for a moment before saying, "It’s a difficult thing, even though her other belongings wouldn't be hard to find in their house, going into the house to fetch it is the real work." "Will it be possible or not?" Mama asked angrily. Mum replied, "It will be possible, give me from now till tonight." Hearing that, Mama ended the call and walked off to the side, fuming.

On Mum's end, as soon as she cut the call, she grabbed her car keys and hijab, went downstairs, and was about to pass the kitchen when she saw her maid. She turned back as the maid was working with meat, looked her up and down, and said, "Safiya." She turned and answered, "Yes, Hajiya." "Didn't you wear a pad? I see your clothes stained with blood." Safiya’s heart skipped a beat because she knew Mum hated dirtiness. She said, "I swear I didn't know, Hajiya." Mum hissed and said, "Off with you, get out of people's way! If you haven't cooked, don't cook, or if you've cooked, eat it yourselves. Go take a bath, freshen up, and then make us another meal."

Safiya said, "Okay, Hajiya." As Mum was about to leave, a thought struck her. She walked back and said, "Go change the shirt you're wearing and come." Safiya hurried off. Mum entered the kitchen, opened the fridge, took out a bottle of artificial flavoring, walked over to the meat Safiya was washing, lifted a piece of meat, and let blood drip into the bottle. Holding it, she walked out. Safiya came out, and Mum looked at her, saying, "Hurry up and get ready so you don't stain my car." "I'm ready," she muttered softly. Mum walked ahead, Safiya followed behind, and they entered the car and drove off.

They drove until they got quite close to Rauda’s house. Mum stopped at a distance, looked at her, and said, "Take this and rub it on the back of your hijab." Safiya took it, turned her hijab around, and did as she was told. Mum looked at her and said, "Go out, enter that house through the left side, greet them, and say that by Allah you started your period unexpectedly on the way and got stained, so you stepped in to freshen up if possible. If they give you a hijab or anything else, take it and come back—I’m waiting here for you. If you do a good job and they give you something, you will get a reward." Saying "Alright," Safiya got out and headed toward the house. Mum watched her, noticing how messed up the hijab looked, making it seem genuinely like bloodstains.

With greetings, Safiya entered Umma’s section. Umma was sitting alone. Umma answered, and Safiya knelt down, saying, "Good afternoon, Hajiya." Umma smiled and said, "Good afternoon." "I came to seek your help, Hajiya. I was on the way when I felt my period start unexpectedly, and it stained me. I came in to clean up if there's a way." Umma said, "Ah, come, let me take you to the bathroom," and she walked ahead with Safiya following her to Rauda’s room, pointing out, "The bathroom is right in there, go on in." "Thank you, may Allah reward you with goodness." Umma replied with "Amin" and left.

Just to play the part, Safiya entered the bathroom and soaked the hijab thoroughly—all in her desire to impress her mistress. She came out and wore it like that. At that moment, Umma walked in, and seeing her, she said, "Oh you, my child, how can you wear a damp hijab like that? Take it off, my daughter—use the one belonging to the absentee [Rauda], it's darker, so if anything stains it, it won't easily be noticed." She handed her a maroon hijab that fell past her knees.

Safiya took it, expressing gratitude: "May Allah reward you with goodness, Hajiya, and repay you. I will bring back this hijab when I return home, In sha Allah." "Amin. Don't worry, keep it; you are like a daughter to me anyway. What is your name?" "May Allah reward you. My name is Safiya." Umma said, "Ah, you are my namesake then, no wonder you are mature." Safiya laughed, they bid each other farewell, and Safiya walked out toward Mum's car.

As soon as Mum saw her coming with the new hijab, she heaved a sigh of relief and watched her happily until she got into the car, removed it, and handed it to Mum, saying, "She gave me this and said it belongs to her daughter who is not around." Mum laughed, took it, and as Safiya sat down without a hijab, Mum said, "Thank you, Safiya. I am pleased with what you did for me; when we get home, I will give you a surprising reward." Safiya felt happy and kept smiling all the way home. Mum dropped Safiya off and immediately drove over to the King’s palace.

Mama was reclining in her inner parlor when she saw her enter. She looked at her and asked, "Why are you here again, abandoning the task given to you?" Mum laughed, unfolded the hijab, showed it to her, and said, "I have already finished. You know me when it comes to anything concerning you, there’s no playing around." Mama sat up properly and said, "I don't understand, what do you mean?" "I’ve already had her hijab brought to me." "I don't like jokes, Sadiya." Mum smiled, sitting down, and said, "I swear I am not joking, Your Highness. This is her hijab."

Mama looked at her, looked at the hijab, and asked, "How did you manage to get it when we haven't even spent thirty minutes discussing it?" Mum then narrated everything to her. Mama laughed and said, "That is why I always love you, Sadiya; your intelligence is way beyond your age." Mum smiled and said, "You strike the iron while it's hot." "True. Now it will be taken to Malam so he can execute the task and eliminate her for good." "Then the matter is settled, and we can be free from anxiety," Mum said with a smile. Mama also smiled happily before asking, "Who can I get to deliver it to him right now?"

Mum said, "What is my use, Your Highness? Just watch," she said, picking up the hijab and hurrying out. Mama let out a cry of victory—the cure for her problem was finally within reach.

Hajiya Mama indeed 😊

Summary

In this chapter, the antagonistic duo of Mama and Mum (Sadiya) conspire to eliminate Rauda (referred to by her nickname Muwadda, meaning "Love" to Asad). Mama is furious after overhearing Asad affectionately calling Rauda by this name. Desperate to get rid of her, they scheme to obtain a personal item of Rauda’s to use for witchcraft or assassination through a local ritualist (Malam).

Mum cleverly uses her innocent maid, Safiya, tricking her into staging a bloodstain on her clothes to infiltrate Rauda's family home under false pretenses. Safiya successfully gains the trust of Rauda's mother (Umma), who kindly lends her one of Rauda's maroon hijabs. Mum retrieves the hijab, takes it back to Mama, and prepares to send it off to Malam to seal Rauda's fate.

Meanwhile, in a separate scene, Asad and Rauda share a tender, emotionally intimate moment. Asad visits Rauda, who is recovering from an illness and feeling homesick. He gently feeds her, comforts her when she cries, and shares subtle moments of vulnerability. He reveals a distinct black wrist mark that distinguishes him from his lookalike, Aliyu, and reaffirms his deep feelings for her with the Arabic phrase "Ana ahibbaki" (I love you).

The chapter concludes back in Nigeria with a dramatic political shift at the palace. The ailing King (Mai Martaba) holds a final council meeting where, despite political tension and the scheming of Waziri, the King officially names Asad as his successor to the throne, appointing Mubarak Wambai as regent in the interim until Asad's return.

Description

The chapter weaves together themes of intense familial malice, dark manipulation, and blossoming romance. It contrasts the malicious, deceptive plotting of the older aristocratic women (Mama and Mum) using an innocent pawn (Safiya), with the quiet, healing intimacy developing between Asad and Rauda. The narrative then shifts grandly into royal politics, detailing a high-stakes council meeting where traditional pageantry, praise-singing, and sudden royal decrees reshape the future of the kingdom.

Comments

  • The Contrast of Characters: The author brilliantly highlights the duality of the characters. On one hand, you have the cold, calculated cruelty of Mama and Mum, who exploit an innocent maid's labor and vulnerability to commit a heinous crime. On the other hand, Asad's character development shines as he softens around Rauda, showing a rare, nurturing side.
  • The Lookalike Mystery: The inclusion of Asad’s wrist mark to differentiate him from Aliyu adds an intriguing layer of mystery, especially since Asad notes that even Mama doesn’t know about it.
  • Pacing and Stakes: The transition from a domestic plot to a high-stakes palace succession gives the chapter a gripping, multi-layered feel, raising the stakes for Rauda and Asad significantly.

Conclusions

The convergence of the assassination plot against Rauda and the sudden coronation of Asad as King sets the stage for major conflicts. As Mama and Mum believe they are finally about to permanently eliminate Rauda, Asad is simultaneously being handed absolute power over the kingdom. This dynamic guarantees high-tension drama as the narrative prepares for the clash between Asad's rising authority and the hidden conspiracies targeting the woman he loves.

 

Deep-Dive Literary Breakdown & Advanced Analytics

Summary

This final structural expansion provides a comprehensive macro-level examination of the chapter's narrative architecture, thematic resonance, and character arcs.

The chapter operates on a triple-layered framework:

  1. The Conspiratorial Plot: Mama and Mum escalate their campaign against Rauda. By weaponizing class privilege, they manipulate the maid Safiya into stealing a personal belonging (a maroon hijab) from Rauda’s family home under false pretenses to feed a dark ritualistic assassination plot.
  2. The Intimate Sanctuary: In stark juxtaposition, Asad and Rauda experience a tender domestic milestone. Asad nurtures an unwell Rauda, dismantling his usual stoicism, revealing a secret wrist mark that distinguishes him from Aliyu, and explicitly declaring his affection ("Ana ahibbaki").
  3. The Political Earthquake: The scene shifts abruptly to Nigeria, where the ailing King Mai Martaba orchestrates a historic succession. Defying internal palace resistance and political scheming from figures like Waziri, the King officially names Asad as his successor, installing Mubarak Wambai as regent.

Detailed Description & Analytics

1. Advanced Narrative Analytics

  • The Irony of Timing (Chronological Convergence): The narrative achieves high dramatic tension through simultaneous action. While the antagonists compile the mystical components necessary to destroy Rauda, the patriarchal authority structure (the King) is actively handing absolute sovereign power to the very man sworn to protect her.
  • Thematic Motif of the "Token": The maroon hijab functions as a powerful literary motif. To Mama and Mum, it is a mechanistic tool of destruction and a key to black magic. To Umma, it is an act of maternal hospitality and inclusion ("you are like a daughter to me"). This highlights a core moral dichotomy: institutional malice versus grassroots human warmth.
  • Symbolism of the Wrist Mark: Asad's physical marker differentiates him from his lookalike, Aliyu, introducing a motif of true identity versus deceptive appearance. By sharing this secret exclusively with Rauda, Asad breaks down his emotional boundaries, signaling that Rauda possesses an intimacy with him that even his own mother (Mama) lacks.

2. Character Dynamics & Sociological Subtext

  • Class Exploitation: The deployment of Safiya underscores the systemic vulnerability of lower-income domestic workers in aristocratic households. Safiya’s fear of dirtiness is weaponized against her, reducing her bodily reality (a period stain) into a tool for espionage.
  • The Evolution of Masculinity in Hausa Romance Tropes: Asad bridges the archetype of the cold, aloof royal heir and the deeply protective, emotionally attuned modern romance hero. His patience during Rauda's crying spells and vulnerability contrasts sharply with the toxic masculinity embodied by external political players.

Comments

  • Structural Symmetry: The chapter moves fluidly from the subterranean depths of malice (Mama's scheming) to the ethereal warmth of emotional intimacy (Asad and Rauda), and finally to the lofty heights of public power (the royal court). This creates a roller-coaster reading experience that keeps the audience hooked.
  • Foreshadowing Conflict: The sudden acceleration of both the assassination plot and Asad's ascension creates an inevitable collision course. The reader is left anticipating the moment Asad discovers the conspiracy against Rauda, armed with the supreme authority of the throne to dismantle his family's toxic control.

Conclusions

Ultimately, this chapter acts as the narrative trigger that launches the story into its highest-stakes phase. By locking the assassination plot and the royal succession into motion simultaneously, the author ensures that the upcoming confrontation will not merely be a domestic dispute, but a battle for survival colliding with the ultimate exercise of sovereign power.

 

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